viernes, 3 de septiembre de 2010

Charlie's looker

This the true history of an eleven years old boy called Charlie.

He was a very shy boy and their partners always made fun of him in the school because he weared very funny clothes.

Once he was walking in the school and his schoolmates scared him and he run away from them since he finally hides in a looker, so they
find him and locked Charlie; he was so scared that he had a heart attack and he died. When they look for him there was so late,
he was dead.

Time after nobody remember him, except the classmates who was involved in his dead.

Suddenly, strange things happened to these partners, they began sew shadows, this changed places and they felt pursued by
something they can't see.

One day his partners were playing in the street next to an allery and one of them saw Charlie, so they tried to explain what was
happening and they couldn't find an explanation since Charlie finally take revenge of them doing the same this partners
did to him.

1 comentario:

  1. "because he weared very funny clothes." wear no es un verbo regular por lo tanto ese no es el pasado de wear.

    "he run away" ¿en que tiempo debería estar esta oración? ¿te acuerdas de que tiempo usamos cuando queremos decir acciones que ocurrieron en el pasado?

    "they find him" nuevamente lo mismo que en la oración anterior

    ¿Seguro que hiciste solo esta tarea? No esta mal pedir ayuda pero es bueno que te expliquen también.

    Independientemente de eso, es importante que elijas correctamente los tiempos en los que deben ir tus oraciones
    Saludos

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